Dracula

Hey, RainaDee. :D I'm here to share some thoughts on this poem. In the first stanza, you sort of say the phrases backward (hopes crushed instead of crushed hopes, etc) ...

Hey there! Dracula is here to review. :D The first suggestion I have is to mention Amber's name earlier on in the chapter. The first time you say her name ...

Hey there. :D This will be a shorter review since I'm going to try and only focus on the story, as requested. Hopefully it'll be helpful. Luckily she was able ...

Hey there, Chaser. Dracula here for a review. :D Already, the Margrave’s scars had faded from the land. The opening two paragraphs were full of awesome imagery. Later on in ...

Hey there, Saruka. :D I think Kays and DemonGoddess have pretty much covered everything, but I'll let you know of a few thoughts I had as I read. “Well, I ...

Hey there, MJTucker. I remember in Year 12 when I did Classical Studies I rewrote a chapter of The Odyssey from Nausicaa's point of view. It was pretty fun. :D ...

Hey, Swordsman. :) Thanks for tagging me. You've already got two reviews that go pretty deep into things so I'll just do some editing if that's okay. I don't have ...

Hey there! I'll start this review with two things to work on and then move into two things you did really well. Before I continue on about how I can ...

Here I am! :D It smelled like heaven. Wow, this was definitely a distinct change from Tom's point of view. In fact, I don't recall Tom ever focusing on smells. ...

Hey there, Demongoddess! Dracula is here to review. :D I'll start of with a few nitpicks... Tord gave me the biggest shit-eating grin on his face at me This sentence ...

Hey there! This is pretty cool already. I had some thoughts as I read through and I've included them below for you... Sheerluck coughed. I haven't read part one so ...

People think you do it for selfish reasons. And what happened to the nicest man I knew? He died. Oh my goodness, this was such an effective way to lead ...

Hey there, IvoryRose. I could not resist reviewing this. Haha. I like your writing. Each line is constructed with simple words, but they interweave to create an interesting and clear ...

Hello, kostia! Here are some thoughts I had as I read this... They all had dreams once. Then life kicked in and everything else seemed distant, obscure and lost. After ...

Hey there, JustPerks. I'm here to review. You have some amaaaaaaazing imagery in here. My favourite instance of this was definitely You pondered whether her hair was "rich fire" or ...