DraconiaxLesoto

I love this, its hauntingly beautiful and caught me up in it easily. It engaged my emotions and didn't let go until the end. It flowed flawlessly (to me anyways) ...

I liked the idea of what you’re trying to convey. Honestly it was good but the way it flowed was very awkward and disjointed. It looked (and sounded) like you'd ...

Very simple and bittersweet, not the worst imagery in the world but some things seemed to contradict each other - "I try to stand but I must fight today"-. Other ...

Nicely written :). I love the way you compared the two men, very realistic and thought provoking. It really made me think back to how I’ve acted to others and ...