DrLavender

Haha, I did!!! If all goes to plan, I hope to have my pilot's license by the end of the month.

Hey Tuckster! Wow, thanks for your in depth review! Yeah, I definitely have a lot of work to do with colons and semicolons, along with sentence structure. Ironically I took ...

Hey there! Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked the piece overall. Yeah, I know the passages were long and I'll work on trimming that down for whichever piece ...

Thanks CaitlinMarie! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Hey Voiceofdragons! Thank you for your review! Haha, I'm glad you felt an emotional attachment to this piece! Yeah, I should've used the singular tense of "woman". Thanks for pointing ...

Hey Crobbins! Thank you for the warm welcome! I'm loving this site and I already feel at home. Ah, using the plural tense of "woman"....I hadn't realized I made that ...

Hey there! Thank you for your review, I really appreciate your kind words on this. It was the first short story I had ever written, over two years ago! You ...

Hey QofS! Thank you for your review! I'm glad you were immersed in the story I wrote, that makes my day! I had written this over two years ago, and ...

Hey! Thank you for your review, I deeply appreciate it! It actually helped me out a ton. I'm sorry you didn't feel emotional about it, although I understand why. It ...

I don't think any writing piece is ever the best haha. I applaud you for writing poetry. I honestly could never get wrap my head around it, I'm too much ...

I definitely should give it a shot! I just need to get this SAT testing out of the way first, haha!

I'm not much of a poet myself! You certainly write way better than I do!

Thanks! Big Brother changed it for me after I sent him a message. Glad you like it, haha! Alright, fantastic! I just wanted to make sure we were on the ...

Hey Wolfie! Always great to hear from you! Yeah, made 100% sure to not have those semicolons in place. Lol sorry about the comma slices in Nero's text. You make ...

Happy to help! You're most sincerely welcome!