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Whoooaaah!! Incredibly A.W.E.S.O.M.E. !!!! :D Really, it was very interesting and i couldtn get my eyes off till i finished reading it! =.= You think you could kinda do a ...

Wow!! I was hooked from the start! :D Awesome debut! Cant waiit to read the rest!! Really awesome! Im afraid i have no corrections to make xD Keep up the ...

I kinda liked this story! :) I was hooked from the first line i must say =.= Keep up the good work! :) I liked the way you changed from ...

SO i really really liked this poem! I liked the message you're sending, the way its written. Good good! :) Looks really true to mee! Keep up the good work! ...

Well where do i start? .... Awesomely good !! I loved it! :D I loved the way i could feel the paiin and all. BUt i must admit that a ...

AWESOOOME!!! :D Whoa i really loved the way you poured alot of emotion in the story. ANd i loved, loved the metaphorical phrases! :D Keep up the good work will ...

Hahaha I found the last part hilarious! :D Man do i know how that feels! -__- But why was it so short?? I didnt quite get the goal you were ...

Wow! Awesome story! I got hooked on it from the first line! :) I really loved it! Sadly, i have no reproaches to make u_u Keep up the good work!! ...

Well this peom was nice! I liked the way your emotions flowed! :) And yes i think you coudl use a little less the word "would" and replace it with ...

Wow! This was a very touching story!! :) Really loved it! But i didnt get the end. Like i think it was a little confusing; like how he was suddenly ...

Ok so i really liked this poem! short, kind of melodramatic and emotional! Lovely! :) but i must say that it was a little "cliché"... Maybe you should try adding ...

OMG THIS Ws AWEEEEESOOOMEEE!!!!! LIKE I GOT HOOKEDD ON IT FROM GHE VERY FFIRST PHRASE! :D Im afraid i aint got no nitpiicks for ya! xD CANT WAIT TO READ ...

Awesooooooommmme!!! I loved this story! It was really touching. I liked the fact that it started with the present, went back in time and then came back to the present! ...

I like like like!!!!! Haa nice poem you got there! :) Very well written, im afraid i dont have anything bad to say xD I liked the way the poem ...

Awesome! Wow this Tomas seems to be going through alot of deceptions lately! T_T Ayy! ANd funny too ofcourse ;) Also, you made another tiny mistake :p Its "waved" not ...