DoubleOJell0

You should make more. However there was A LOT of mistake in here: The font you were using shouldn't be in the entire chapter, If it's in the past just ...

That's a really good story! Yea, you should make more. There were some mistakes in here, though. I will tell you all of them: "front of me and I tripped, ...

Well, this was a lot longer than I expected! Anyways, this is even better than the last few ones that I'm surprised this has no reviews nor comments. Ok, you ...

This is really sad due to the fact that I knew someone who wouldn't talk that much due to a disease :( . Anyways, this was really great! I was ...

I hate you too.. Just kidding :D. Anyway, this poem is great! BUT: "Cos you can't find me on any shelf" I think you should write "Cus" or "coz"... or ...

I'm pretty sure this is a suicide note, right? So, this guy is sad of his life, "How it means nothing" and always wanted to mimic a writer...and write down ...

The story is going great so far! There ARE a few things that I don't like: I walk up to the house and go around to the back door once ...

Ok, this is pretty short, but it sure gives out a message. Now, I don't think that many people worship these creatures. HOWEVER, you should keep fighting, The Christan population ...

Yay, time for a review with a poem like this. Yay. Ok, first of all, try to block bad words or rate it 18 plus. Also, this poem seems great, ...

This is REALLY good, but there somethings that I can tell you. First of all, "The Assassins" is too cliche. I suggest "Three Guilty" or maybe "The assassins and the ...