Dorsia

Hi! Okay, first up: I love your poem! I can relate to it really easily, and so can heaps of other people. So many people judge others far too quickly ...

This is great! Lyrics can be especially hard to write (at least that's what I think) and you've done really well. You've described it brilliantly; emotions, actions, everything. It's easy ...

Wow! I really love this, particularly the first four stanzas. They flow so nicely and the rhyming is spot-on. The way you described all these things never happening is quite ...