DorianBlaine

I really love how you described the setting itself. You provided extensive detail that did not take away from the story itself, but helped give the story life and made ...

Firstly, it was absolutely gorgeous writing! I loved the way you described Katrina and her struggles; though I'm not entirely sure that this was inspired by real events, it seemed ...

This is quite a poem you've written! I love the use of emotion you expressed. Though I'm not quite a fan of rhyme schemes, it seems to fit perfectly in ...