DomTheDumb

Ty man! Your reviews have been SO helpful. When I sit down to edit and do draft 2, I'm going to have these screenshots in front of me lol. Will ...

Also yeah, "chapter" 3 is up XD It's just 9 minutes so

Yeah this was a bad section to isolate lmao. Chapter 3 answers all the questions you asked about why Rob is the way he is and why these people are ...

Part 3:

Also, thanks for pointing out the clunky sentences etc. I think when you read your own writing, it's very difficult to spot stuff like that so really appreciate that. But ...

So I was re-reading the thing and the "briefing" bit, where Ravi, Vel, and Rob, all talk together for the first time is DEFINITELY the WORST part of the story. ...

Hey man! Thanks for the review. I won't respond in detail (it's 0230hrs in India rn) but I really appreciate it. I do want to say tho that you're 100% ...

Purple, in this context, means you've done too much. Like you're squeezing too much out of your paragraphs, and as you squeeze, they turn purple. Does that help? Also I'm ...

this world gave me a dystopian feel that doesn't seem like the healthiest environment for relationships. Idk man, India's social fabric rn is not really very different to what I've ...

Hey, ty so much for the review! Writing more rn lol. Regarding the numbers (like 4.4 billion etc) - that's something I'm going to fix later. Ik that inflation will ...

Tbh I have no idea how the platform works. What is better?

Hey! Thanks for leaving me a review! My first ever on YWS. Glad you liked it :)

Just a reminder lol: this is WIP!