DomTheDumb

Thanks, man! > There are several sentences that can be improved in terms of grammar and coherence, but as a whole, this chapter does a good job of building Kademos ...

Bro I'm not going to write a drawn-out combat scene. A) I don't have the word count for it (I'm already at 11k out of 20k), and B) I HATE ...

Your story, your call, brodie

I'm from India lol - a huge city near Bombay!

Been to the south many times! My best friend is from Kent lmao. Glad to meet you, Rev :D

The Midlands lmfao. Went to Warwick for uni - both undergrad and post. Then left the UK bc the job market is shit and no one was hiring 😭

For the next part (i.e. part 3) pls read the disclaimer lmao. I've spent like 6 years in the UK, and ik ball

Hey, Rev! Glad to see you're still following along lol, and I'm glad you like it! There's 2 more parts for you to catch up on 👀

Hey! Thank you for the kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :D There's more coming, and the story still has another ca. 6000 words to go before it's ...

Hey man! Thanks for the review. Glad you're liking it so far :D Will be posting other chapters later today. And the reviews have kinda inspired me to keep going ...

Coif is a chain mail (or padded leather) headdress worn under a helmet. It gives extra protection to the head and wearing a helmet without it is extremely uncomfortable. Aside ...

Hey! Thanks for your review. Glad you liked it :D Yeah, when time comes for me to write the rest of the story and edit after, I'm going to cut ...

Yeah, when I began to write this, it was initially just a concept note describing a village lmao. When time comes to work on this, I'm going to rework the ...

The story is ready up to chapter 5, but I won't post them all rn just to avoid clogging up The Green Room lol

Yeah, will do. Still at work so when I have a moment, I'll read something. Maybe one of the shorter ones lol