DodjyWriter

Thanks for the review, again! haha i didn't even realise...acorns :)

Cool, thanks for the ideas, i'll try it out! It looks an interesting way to write something.

Thanks for the review! Ha, i feel pressured now as to not disappoint. :)

Ha, thanks for the review...again! The corridor was a sort of metaphor in his head. My idea of it was a visualisation of the change between being a happy kid, ...

I plan to only have three parts so i thought it'd be too short to post in the novel section, but if you think it's easier i could do that? ...

Thank you for the review! I assume you're referring to the clock with no punctuation in the speech? Yeh, it was deliberate, I noticed the effect used in The Shining ...

Short and sweet, this is brilliant. I think you have just introduced me to poetry.

I honestly wasn't expecting such generous feedback, from both of you, so i'm not sure where to start. So i'll begin how the story started and talk from scratch. I'm ...

Macabre, i like that! Thank you for taking the time to first read it, and then comment. I wasn't expecting such fast replies, so i'm very grateful. Ha, i'm quite ...