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Re: The True Monsters
Hello! I like the general idea of this poem and in many ways for many people, it speaks some measure of truth. However, I believe that the view you express ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Glass Girl
Hello! I like this poem a lot and the message and emotions you convey are strong and vibrant. I am struggling to accept the voice you've chosen in this poem. ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Promiscuity (attempt at punk-poetry)
Hello! I like your style and I find the subject interesting, if not a reprise of many other poems covering the same topics and ideas. Some of your lines are ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: The Irony of Health-Food Junkies
I love your poem. It captures the condescension, the hypocrisy and the overall chaotic nature of the health food industry. The style was right in step with this, and your ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: When The Heart Sings Alone
Hello, I love your poem and I can definitely relate to it. I think the words you use are beautiful and well chosen. Some areas I feel are a bit ...
Aug 24, 2013
