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The poem is too plastic it's like i heard it all before but the style that it is written in isn't used much lately, so that you can bring it ...

I can't really reda any emotion in this poem besides disgust. To me it seems like a hurried peice of writting and the title was so promising. Add more details ...

Intresting begining. Some lines are a bit contradicting as Arion pointed out. I think you can give more details in the description of the princess and Cupid. I hope this ...