Divya

I don't know whether this poem is a manifestation of your true feelings, I guess it is, but I could totally relate to the poem. A lot of times that's ...

Nice try! Good poem. The only problem is spacing. You didn't give enough spacing to the words. Like for example lovely past, recollected memories etc. The mistakes are quite obvious. ...

Wow! It's a really romantic poem. I can see you put a lot of efforts into it as it's very long. Some of the line were really good, like for ...