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Divya

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Goodbye, friend.

    The poem is short, but If you read properly, You realise there's a deeper meaning to it. It seemed that you tried to make that person your friend desperately, then ...

    May 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: born to Fly

    It's a good poem and as you know the only problem is punctuation. Nevertheless, I enjoyed reading it. Though I felt like it sounded more like a song than a ...

    May 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Doll Face

    I found this poem a bit funny but sadly true. Many women do dieting, make up all sorts of things to beautify themselves. They are not satisfied about how much ...

    May 16, 2015


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