Disenchanted

*waves* Hi~ C: Just wanted to say, before I review this poem, I got goosebumps while reading it. xD Now off we go! One wings of white feathers agleam, is ...

Hey there! C: Just wanted to say that this piece was very... interesting. It kind of confused me at times though. Was this 'you' breaking up with the narrator or ...

Can I just say? That your vocabulary is stunning! You used different variations/synonyms of words and used them effectively in the poem! To be honest, I had to grab a ...

Wow, this deep. I honestly have nothing to critique with this piece. It seems very well thought out and intriguing. It's the kind of poem that makes you wonder who ...

This was excellent! Great job! The only thing I want to point out is that the rhythm and beat of the lyrics go along smoothly except for the second stanza. ...

There are several things I wanted to point out with your story. First of, as soon as I looked at it, I felt the sudden urge to just pick another ...

To be honest as well, the story of the Frog Prince always irritated me because of the princess; she just seemed so arrogant and spoiled. And I for one, would ...

Holy magikarp, this was excellent. The descriptiveness is just beautiful and although it isn't lengthy, the story itself was good. I was a little confused as to why she had ...

I'm just wondering, is this song based on the Vocaloid songs Prisoner and Paper Planes? If so, I can imagine Len and Rin quite vividly. I like the way you ...

Wow. This is really good. I feel really bad for the girl/narrator- whomever's point of view this is in. It seems she's in one of those tight spots when no ...

"A marvelous work of literature, introducing a mysterious plot that has yet to spiral into a thrilling novel. The personalities of Daisuke and Elder seem to cast an eerie feel ...

Wow, this is really powerful and quite adorable. (Hey look, I made a rhyme. xD) It kind of reminds me of this Japanese legend about two lovers Hikoboshi-sama and Orihime-sama. ...

Hey, this story is really interesting. It can be confusing at times, like for starters, I don't know who Lucas is and what is his role in the story. We ...

This is why I love stories about Death. Not because I'm a psychotic freak (xD) but because there are so many different types of death to choose from. I love ...

This is just so beautiful and uplifting. Great job! The one line that got me and really touched me inside would have to be: I look at myself now, I ...