Directioner046

Wow, great poem! It's rather sad, although I love the triumphant feeling at the end. :) Normally I don't like poetry that much, but you strung the words together so ...

Aww, thank you! That means a lot :)

Thank you! I really appreciate your tips/corrections. I will edit the story as soon as my busy life allows :)

Wow, great poem! :) I love the way you strung the words together so beautifully; great job! I look forward to reading more of your writing :)

Great story! :) It's short, but you conveyed the emotions perfectly. It was not at all hard to see the story behind it, even though the reader is given few ...