Dilbert64

Thank you for the review! It was very helpful.

Thank you!

I'm not sure if the ending is any good or not.

Thanks for the review, and thank you for being so thorough, it was really helpful!

Thanks!

Thank you!

Thank you!

Thanks for the review! Parts of it do come off pretty awkwardly. This was really helpful, thanks!

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I guess the man's actions do seem pretty illogical when you think about them. I should have put in something less extreme, like the guards ...

Thanks for the review! I'll try to spellcheck more thoroughly in the future.

Thanks for the review! I actually was wondering if I went off on tangents too much at points in the story, so thanks for telling me.

Thank you!

Oh sweet irony. Also it would be so funny if you actually gave this in to your teacher.

I like how complete this story feels in such a short space of time. Also, this story is really sweet.

That makes sense, sorry for not picking those thing up.