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DiannePan

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stories From Malaysia: The Penglipur Lara

    Hello there, I didn't expect the ending, its quite amusing actually :3 I think the story itself flowed well, but the parts in bold seemed rather forced. Other than that ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The old man's final moments

    Thank you for the wonderful piece. I shall go and click on "follow" right about now :3 Just thought of saying that in the review cause it's kinda creepy reading ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Womens Suffage Child

    Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Womens Suffage Child

    Hello there, I was really touched by the story and it has a great potential but here are my two cents of a constructive critic. Firs the nit-picks I was ...

    Jan 14, 2011


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