Devonlynne

Ello there! I thoroughly enjyed your poem, but a few things. Somehow in the chorus, "So Easily." Doesn't seem to fit well. Maybe because of length.. Maybe do something like, ...

I enjoyed reading this poem, Alot. ^.^ I liked all of it, I can easily spot this as a song! :) If I ever become a famous singer, (Yeah, Right...) ...

haha. It was cute, but it might need a little bit more length... Maybe why this person feels this way... Such and such. :) And watch your title, it did ...

I like it. :) It explains some about myself, When, In fact, I din't write it.. A lot did start with "you" But I feel it set a repition type ...

I like the idea, although I do believe I got a bit confused onto whether or not it was supposed to rhyme, or not... 2 stanzas rhymed, and 2 didn't. ...