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Re: Into the Sea
This is different from other literature I have read before. From what I read, I know your main character wants to be a fish. Why is that? I'm not entirely ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: .
I have a few tips and suggestions. First I think you introduced too many characters in one chapter, the first chapter at that. You can use some description to clarify ...
May 7, 2015