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DevanEWilliams

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Listen.

    Yeah, I think I might change that. Thanks for the review! :D

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled Novel- Prologue

    Thanks so much for the review. Yeah, you're right about one thing--she gets herself into quite a mess later on. But you'll just have to wait and see ;D

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled Novel- Prologue

    Thanks so much for the review! I'll definitely think about what you said. I want to put as much effort into this as I can. Also, if you are curious, ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled Novel- Prologue

    Hey Blues, Thanks for the review! Also, yes, this is the beginning of the novel idea that I posted in the Writers' Corner some time ago. I'm glad it's memorable ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Untitled Novel- Prologue

    All right, I know this wasn't your fault, it's mine, but Aven's a girl. I really should make that obvious. ^^" Thanks for the input though, I will definitely be ...

    Jun 13, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Pity Party

    Hello there! First off, let me just say WELCOME TO YWS! :D I hope you've gotten along well so far. If you need anything, feel free to ask! Anyway, on ...

    Mar 20, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Other Side

    Thanks so much for your feedback! I really didn't know what to expect when I entered this, being new to this site, but I'm excited to write more. Your comments ...

    Aug 1, 2011


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