DevanEWilliams

The original writing of this was intended for an audience that already understood the subject and what it was really saying, so I felt that subtlety would not be appropriate. ...

This is a story of what my illness does to me. It's kind of expected that it's sending the wrong message. Hence the trigger warning at the beginning. Thanks for ...

awh, Devan fails at code things. :(

Thanks so much for your suggestions! I've been having a lot of trouble with awkward wording and such, which isn't exactly helped with all of those abbreviations. You may wonder ...

Thanks so much! This was very helpful. I'll see about trying out your suggestions. :D

Thank you for your feedback! In reality, I posted this and then made changes a while later on the actual essay, so a lot of what you said I have ...

Gah, sorry I did the quotes wrong D:

Ooh, your update was good. It added a lot to the characterization. However, your paragraph with the butler talking to the MC is a bit strange to me. Have him ...

Thanks for the review! It was actually a "descriptive piece" assignment for my English class. I don't know if I'll end up adding to it, but I felt pretty good ...

Funny how I say that I don't have much patience with poetry when I write poetry myself. Oh well. xD

Thanks so much! :D

Thanks for the review! :)

Thanks! :D

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Thanks so much for the review! It's much appreciated.