Dethl

Thanks for the comments and critiques :D, this is my first draft of this short tale which will be the base for my novel. And yes I know the king's ...

Thanks :D

Don't worry, I commit lazy errors pretty often XD, once posted my poem in a totally wrong section.

Thanks, and about the name its funny XD since I accidentally posted this in the narrative poetry, I rushed to delete my old post and post it in here, so ...

Lovely poem, intense and with an message of hope, a little bit of redound but I think it helped to give feeling to the poem.

This poem is great! its short but powerful, i like it :D

This is good, i like his attitude, you know his sarcasm - the way he expresses himself, my toughs (and the plot XD) tell me that this will be a ...