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hey, great job on these two chapters, i was dying to read them, thank god for the feed tab on my profile ^_^ i did notice one mistake though I ...

i noticed a couple of mistakes: I'm Liyam, a Irvamp. thinking that should be an not a like Ranger Hawk said overall the story is good, though i would try ...

first off i'd just like to say, that the title is amazingly well placed, also i like the story, it is rather graphic but i have personal beliefs that a ...

Hey Pointe! I love the story, it's really cool the way you've re-written a very classical story, so great job on that, but i would suggest spacing the information about ...

i like this poem, it makes sense and gives a big impression about how we lose our innocence as we get older and that causes us to think very different ...

it's a really great poem elder, though I have to say it is rather straight forward, part of the beauty of a poem is the metaphors that the readers have ...

i really like the story, i mean i thought at first it would be weird, even for a girl who likes girls, to be kissed by a stranger or to ...

really good job in writing this though there were a few mistakes but the top review already corrected them, i'm interested to see what the rash decision is and i ...

All I thought about was growing up and leaving the rinky dink town I called home. We are sorry to inform you but your husband, George Bird, has been killed ...

gives a good idea about rebellions in the past, while reading it an image of the French revolution popped up into my mind, i love the idea that the leader ...

i loved the story though there were a few nitpicks here and there and i noticed that sometimes its in past tense and in others its in present tense, when ...

i like this story especially since its in the first person, i ike that sort of writing, don't ask me why, and it gives two sides of a story so ...

the story is good, i like the way it starts in the present and then sets off into the past to explain the story, i was bummed that it ended ...

I love the story! it's very unique and obviously has a back story to it! possibly the whole "Lizzy" thing was just a mistake which is made by every human, ...