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I know I've introduced a ton of characters but only three are meant to be main characters. Everyone else is supposed to be recurring or background characters. I probably need ...

Thanks Shima for reviewing! I notice a pattern now from a lot of reviewers that I need to add more details. So, I will do just that, and, as much ...

Whoa! I enjoyed reading this. The way you write your imagery is great. I felt like I could see those two in the kitchen, lazing around. This is a rare ...

Thank you for reviewing. I have a lot to work on, but this helps a lot! I will also make the beginning part into the prologue.

I will make those changes. Gosh, I really hadn't noticed the continuity errors D:

Hiya! Thank you for the review. It's always appreciated. I will make the changes you mentioned.

Hi. Thanks for the review. ^^ The articles you linked seem helpful, so I will look into them more closely later. Was there any section in particular that drifted into ...

Keya and I walked for nearly an hour. By that time, we were already 4 miles away from Kor. We stopped to take a break. “How much longer are we ...

Thanks pkidchick! I'm not the best with grammar and it's something I need to actively work on. Your reviews are super helpful because they give me an idea of what ...

Thanks for reviewing, Ty! This gives me a lot to work on, so I am going back to edit again.

He told her her eyes were beautiful the way they were. Not her physical, fake eyes she hated. The eyes of her soul. I love these lines! She was envious. ...

Hey! There are never any groans for you! Huge thanks for reviewing again! I tend to take a long time to get to the good stuff, so there's a lot ...

Thank you for critiquing this. I now have another idea of what needs to be edited. Thanks again

No problem! I love cartoony art ^^

Aw, that's nice! Your style's really cute