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(As always) thanks for the review! I made those changes and got ride of the "left field" line. You pointed out a lot of good things especially the contractions. I'm ...

Thanks for reviewing again. It's great to read your thoughts. Ophelia was introduced in chapter 2 and Wolfeman in chapter 4.

Hi Mikhail, thanks for your review. I am happy that you are enjoying the story!

Thank you for the review! I will try to make those changes soon.

Hi, Mea. Thank you for your review!I always appreciate anyone who takes the time to write one. I'll do some revision on the dialogue and Wolfeman and add some dialogue ...

Thanks a bunch, Carlito! I will try to add more description/details during the dinner party. Detailed writing is something I seriously have to work on. It's nice to have another ...

Thank you, ScarlettFire. I appreciate you taking the time to review this. I only put the prologue with chapter 1 because I was cheap. I didn't want to spend the ...

Hi Letttissyya, I will post the sixth chapter after I do some edits on this one and get some more review points. Thanks for reading

Thanks Silverberry, for your review. Don't worry you weren't harsh at all. I will do some more revising on this story. After reading it over again, I noticed a few ...

Thanks pkidchick! I honestly could not figure out if it was slang or slung, so thanks for pointing out the right one. I will do some more revising.

Thanks, Squirtlepowiee (pokemon fan?) for your review. You made some great points, and you weren't harsh at all. I will make those changes. ^^ By the way, Curi's mom is ...

You made my day with this review! Someone actually enjoyed something I wrote? I am overjoyed. I made this yesterday in an hour, so I didn't really look into it ...

No problem! Eventually, I will read this in its entirety ^__^

Oh yeah- I honestly just like unique names. Curi's short for Aucuria. I knew someone with that name, and I fell in love with it ever since. Also, there are ...

I will definitely work on my detail and character interaction. Toki and Cooleo are Curi's (almost) friends, so I would say they are main characters. There's only one more character ...