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Thanks! Yes, it's the same party Cooleo's attending. He actually won't reappear for a few chapters, but he was the catalyst to explain the dinner party setting

Hi Europa, thanks for the review! c: I decided to make those changes

Thank you for reviewing so quickly! I really appreciate it because I know it's a lot to read. I made those changes you mentioned, and I will have to think ...

Hi Myjaspercat, thanks for the review. I hadn't realized I jumped around so much and lost focus. I wasn't sure whether I would add a description of her pink eyes ...

I don't know. I generally think of her as 15, but she's a little childish

Thank you for reviewing! *sinks ship* Noooo, Wolfeman's 24 and Curi's like 13-16. It's just a harmless crush XD Curi is very quick-tempered and the work cubicles are kind of ...

Thank you, Wolfical! I went back to add the m-dashes!

Thanks for reviewing, Birdman! I am in the midst of trying to edit this chapter again, so it flows better.

Hmm... that's a good point you make. Thanks for reading!

Thanks for the review, papillote!

Arcturius specializes in financial magic, I want this type of magic too (i hope it can conjure up money), and I definitely want to see Edna steal that sword!

I haven't read one of these in awhile! Okay, the gun control one was good. I thought it was too... normal for lack of a better word and then the ...

Thank you for the review! I will try to revise some of the dialogue! Was there a particular part that you thought needed revision? Concerning the names, Curi is short ...

Thank you for the review, and for pointing out those things. I really appreciate it!

Thanks for the review(s)! You're pretty much right. 6. If Wolfeman gets the travel job, he can do something he loves and potentially pay back his owed money (if he ...