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First of all, I just have to say that I love this! It's probably one of the best poems I've read on this website so far (and I have read ...

Well, I'm here to review your story, as you can see ^-^ Firstly, I'd just like to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this! It was quite entertaining and ...

I quite like the idea you've come up with here, it's different from most stories you read about fairies and that helps to keep the reader's attention. I also like ...

I'm just going to start off by saying that I quite liked the ending. You left a cliffhanger which gave a hint to what the rest of the story was ...

I think this was a good start to your story, there were no grammar/spelling mistakes that I spotted and that's good. The beginning was quite interesting as well, it definitely ...

Your plot is quite interesting, though from what you've written here not much can be taken from it. You were quite vague when giving away information on what the story ...