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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Wish

    I'll have to agree, it had no depth. Seems like you're waiting...waiting...waiting...and still waiting for something to happen. While I was reading this, I imagined a little girl in a ...

    Jul 1, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: anti finite

    Even though it's strangely simplistic, it's still a poem. And what's more is it's actually good. A good poem doesn't need to be 50 lines long to get past an ...

    Jul 1, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: stop(an idea)

    First off, you sell yourself short. This is a very good poem. Most poems that you may think sucks from the moment you write them, will not show their absolute ...

    Jun 19, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Last Poem (not literally)

    Well, here goes nothin'... In the second stanza: Took me a while to notice Don’t you think? I must be really stupid, and blind To have only just seen I ...

    Jun 19, 2005


I understand what you're saying, and your comments are valuable, but I'm gonna ignore your advice.
— Roald Dahl