Demoness

Cant find anything i dont like about this Poem!! Absolutely amazing! Keep writing

I really like this one. The rhymes easy flow, and even though the poem was short the story was fully told. Very good! Keep writing, and u should rhyme more ...

Mmh, yes... i always do writing mistakes.. i will look it over! x) Thanxx for replying though! And i will try change the long thing bit too.. but i always ...