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Re: Introduction: Shinobu Mendoza
LouisCypher pretty much summed up my feelings for you story. The way you write isn't bad, although I think you meant to but "the true" instead of "thetru", everything else ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Enough (Prologue)
I agree with LouisCypher, the husband is just like every other abusive husband out there so why should I want to continue? You see where i'm going with this? That's ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Lunar Blaze Chapter 2
Hi there. I just finished reading chapter 1 and 2 of your story and this is my review of this chapter. First of all let me say that your story ...
Feb 2, 2012 -
Re: City Spirit
This is the piece piece i've read in a while. Like I said before you are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work it's really impressive. Your stories ...
Oct 14, 2008
