Demeter

Great, there hasn't been a flashback for ages! I almost thought you had forgotten it :) remember that me ‘n’ your parents are ‘ere for you.” "`n´" is a bit ...

Très bien, mon amie! Short but sweet, as always. “You were murmuring something in your sleep...” ‘Oh no.’ Huh? “Someone would have to be mental if they dare say a ...

Hello again. I feel like I want to…die.” It didn't seem like that before when she smiled to Sarah's text, which, by the way, should have been in italics or ...

The others have covered the reviewing so well there's very little for me to do anymore. This part was very good because of the drama, and I think you've built ...

Oooh, nice ending. It's great that Lyla and Tom start to realize that having a baby is not only milk and honey. I mean, really think about it. This chapter ...

Oh no, Tom! Why did you do that? I have to be non-creative and just say that I agree with people on most things. Lyla seems to have gotten over ...

Tom is really great, I have to say. I felt dumbfound. Had I been that blind and oblivious to him? Had it been me shutting him out? Well, I suppose ...

Hi, choco! I'm here like I promised :) I really like the atmosphere of this song. Oh, I wish I could hear it with music, I'm sure it would be ...

Hello! I kept my promise to myself and continued to chapter 6 :) The funny thing is, the screen was from some reason so wide that part of the text ...

Haha, I love the ending :D I had made a decision that I would read and review only the first five parts for today, but I don't know... I'd like ...

This is very pleasant to read, with pleasant I mean its smoothness and the flashback bits in the middle. When you only fix those punctuation mistakes, there'll be very little ...

I had managed to avoid mum after our screaming match. Screaming match? If mum "continued calmly" and "muttered under her breath", the only one screaming would be Lyla, right? The ...

Okay, here I am again. I think it's a good thing that the parts are so short, it keeps the reading comfortable. JCobsesed, the words colour and programme are both ...

Hello, Alainna! I've heard that this is a good story, so I decided to take a look. :) “… irresponsible…disgrace…hate…” You should leave empty space before each of these words. ...

Hello! At first, congratulations on the beautiful title! Then to the poem itself. Not sharp, nor flat I'm not quite sure whether you can use the word "nor" if there's ...