Demeter

Hi, Persephoneia! You say it's a weird metaphor, but I don't think such things exist at all -- there are just metaphors. And I like yours. (it would hurt later, ...

Hey there, Tinalove =) So. I can't say I was very touched by this poem. In fact, I got a bit bored! Instead of a poem, this reminds me of ...

Hey, Ben! Well, I haven't read the short story, but let's give this a try, anyhow. So, as you said yourself, it's just for laughs, and I like it -- ...

Hi Sillyducky! (I believe that the essay ends with the words "right to be wrong" and the rest is just a follow-up to the A/N?) It was quite interesting to ...

Hi there, Pants/Navita! As I told to Navita, I've got rusty in reviewing, and also in poetry, since I haven't read/written any since the summer. But I hope I can ...

Hey, KAH! Overall, this reminded me more of a song than a poem. Perhaps it's the way you repeat one stanza, as if it were a chorus. It could work ...

Hey Kylan! So… Granny Smiths, William Faulkner… yeah, you can tell I like this story. :P She knew how these things went. This is boring. There's only so much of ...

Hi Kylan! Well, to begin with, there are some great words in this poem! One thing that confused me, though, was the part in the first stanza where there's "makes ...

Hey Ninja! I don't know what the contest is about... I hope it's not about writing a piece about chocolate, because I'd like to think you came up with it ...

Hey Wario! I really liked this, actually! I'm very impressed about the fact that you (apparently?) wrote the music to it, too. I'd be very interested in hearing this with ...

Hey there, Sakura! There are things you need to pay attention to when writing rhyming poetry. Well, more like things you absolutely must cling to all the time when writing ...

Hey Enigma! Firstly, it's awesome you've written a fanfiction about Sesame Street, haha. I'm not very familiar with that show, and I haven't read the other chapters, but I'll try ...

Hey Mattoo! At some places, the choppy sentences fitted perfectly. At some, however, they became annoying. I think that with everything, less is more, therefore also with the short sentences. ...

Hey, Stella! First off, this was very entertaining. I didn't think the humour was forced at all; everything seemed something that should be expected from you anyway. I kept sniggering ...

Hi Gal! Well, this is again one of those works that make me do a double-take when reading, but I guess it serves me right for naming myself something that ...