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Thank you :) Yeah, I don't really like metaphors :) Being blunt is tough love and that's what I've learned. Anyways, thanks again!

Yeah. Kinda. Well, not entirely. I don't cutcut, I just know what it feels like to be so alone and feel so empty and things like that. Thanks, that's one ...

Thansk :) I worked really hard on finding the write words for it. sure comes in handy - or else I'd never know what contused meant! Anyways, thanks. I'm glad ...

SporkPunk: Your comments about the poem are appreciated and however you feel about it, this poem was just to satiate some of the feelings I've been having. I admit I ...

Thanks :) I don't use punctuaction in my poetry, but I guess it's time to start... Do you need puncuation? Anyways, your review helped and I reread the things you ...

You are like the best reviewer ever! The one thing I dislike about your review is the fact I'll most likely have to work on this piece for a longer ...

Thanks. I do admit that the first chapter was strained. This one came so much more easy :) I love pretty colors and I'm kind of ignoring when they said ...

Hehehe, yeah, thanks for the review. I'll definetly consider your rhyming words (why didn't I think of google!) I don't know what you mean by the "everyday" being there though. ...

Hehe, thanks. I reread the poem and you're write. Better change that to something that rhymes with "laughter"... Hmm, what could possibly rhyme. Here are several suggestions; I'll let my ...

Thanks for the review, most of what you said was very truthful. I disagree with your first statement. She is nothing like me. I have become greatly attached to Delanie, ...

Hehe, I'm glad you liked it ;) I don't cut, I never have but I used to involve myself in self-harm, not being specific for you ;) I know a ...

Oh glad you changed the last bit :) It sounds better now. You're a great poet! Keep it up :)

Hehe, thanks :) I'm glad there are such things as reviewers. I was like screw it when people said I needed more emotion but it is a lot better now! ...

Yeah. I portray more of her narrative story but I could create more stanzas as to why she is cutting or what she's feeling. I used to have problems with ...

Thanks for the review, I guess I'll have to give it a good one-over tonight. As for the experience, I have lots, trust me. A poem is generally written for ...