Deifyance

I have been folloing this series closely. All I have to say is Blilliant!!!! More! More!

good job! looks like everyone already got everything haha. I just noticed the last sentence. The turned to my with a bloody muzzle and growled. He leaped and as his ...

Gah...hurry and get the next chapter out already! Im hooked.

It's a real challenge for the people who like complicated stories. I think you should keep going and don't stop, I really liked it. Good Luck

WOw, okay im a fan. I love these stories. The plot so far is inticing and it is pretty original in its own way. Very well written. Will be watching ...

Ok, thank you all. I agree with most of your posts. I happen to be in love with the repeating thing right now, I have no idea why. I wrote ...

Yeah, it was pretty good. I would suggest splitting the dates up. And there where a few grammer errors, too. Fix 'em and it'll be pretty good.

Thank you, and I hate commas. Again, I wrote it in 10 mins and barely edited it. And the bone-white thing is sopposed to be repeated. Note: its not a ...

No, no. You're here to learn. I absolutely suck at spelling and grammar. but I'm learning, mostly from this site. :D just give it some time.

keep it coming :D I'm a fan!

Hm, this does sorely remind me of 'Twilight' gone bad. Have you read it? All-in-all, awesome start, just a bit more detail on the chars. Looking foreward to the next ...

Wow, this was amazing. seriously, did you just get done taking Chem, or did you just look up the reactions of a toaster? You have finally found a way to ...