Deanie

Thanks for the review Emma!

Ooh I am sorry for not noticing :'(

Haha, sequel you wish. Fine you win. When a child (note the child) stutters, it is done like that xD Thank you for being awesome and reviewing all of these

My favourite poem of yours so far... Too good to critique ^.^

So many reviews O.o nothing useful to add... Just passing through...

Thank you for the review! ;)

Shady! This was so near perfection D: Some of your best writing *that I've read anyways*. I can't really review it because I don't know what I would've said... I ...

Yes. You can continue calling me a genius anytime xD No beating up my Ben!

Thank you Iggy for reading this far, really

Yes, hopefully revisions by then :D I want to get it all done in summer ;)

Thanks for sticking with this all the way through! I thought Ben's aging might create some questions but I decided to leave it, in case I ever /did/ do a ...

"clumps of dead protein cells all the same" That makes hair sound so flattering xD Thanks for the review Goldflame! I hope you like the ending ;)

Deanie is a character name? How did I not know of this!

Thank you Aley!

Aley, you are awesome