Deanie

Haha thanks for the review. :D And slow down there with the reviewing too ^.^

Heh... if you say so xD

Ssssh don't say that about nailpolish. Everyone will think I'm shallow xD Your poetry does not stink, Timmy! I have told you that before... in many reviews, hehe :P This ...

Thanks for the review. I guess I need to make it more clear what I'm meaning, and you're right about the clashing stanzas ;)

That's not too bad at all, you know.

Thanks for the awesome review Timmy ^.^ Anything helps!

Thank you! I will try clearing it up ;)

YOUR review. Why thank you ^.^

All these things I didn't know myself.

Me again :P I liked this poem because it had a very good use of the words. There was a lot of detail in the imagery and the way everything ...

I SHOULD HAVE SEEN THIS EARLIER! Stormsie you are amazing

>< I didn't even notice that. I must've been in Doctor Who mode writing this :P

Hehe any review is a wonderful review :D Nitpicks are good! I need those ^.^

This poem should be lyrics xD It works very well as a poem too, but I could really imagine someone singing it as well...