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Re: Taunting voices and broken thoughts
Blergh, another one of your poems I can't write a proper review for! I like how your experimenting with new styles in your poetry. It's churning out your best poems ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 7.2
It really did ^^ I am going to work a lot more on Mei's character seeing as she gets really important later on, and Ayano is a new character I ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Say Something
I'm not so great when it comes to reviewing prose poetry. All I can say is that I love it. In my opinion, some of your best poetry yet :)
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.2
Thanks so much for this! It all made sense, of course. I'm going to work on writing faster but you know... most of my energy gets channeled into Eyes Wide ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Christmas Day and The End (12 Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Aww thanks sis!
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Christmas Day and The End (12 Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Aww thanks sis!
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 44 (Revised)
*quietly murders Timmy* *creeps away*
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.2
Blue, you are the best adopted parent ever for this. I couldn't've asked for anyone better :) Thanks for all the help!
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Seventeen
Oooh got it! Thanks for clearing it up for me :3
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 24: Bruno's Demise
OH MY NO WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO BEN WHAT WHAT WHAT I WILL KEEP READING
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 8.1
Timmy, you are awesome.
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 23: Untitled
No review, it's too short! I am just going to say... I can't believe Asteria isn't feeling guilty for what she's done to Juno. I mean, yes her life is ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Fire and Water: Chapter One (Rewrite)
Aaaand that just became my longest review to date :P
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 6.1
Thanks for the review!
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.2
I think Tamara should be allowed to cry over her mother leaving. It is a big deal, no matter what age you are. Especially as her life isn't fantastic outside ...
Jul 28, 2014
