Deanie

Yesss! More people tackling ellipsis problems :D

Aww Silvy thank you for this! So helpful! I really need to put more cheery moments in this novel and insert strength as a turning point for Avril. Thank you!

aaaand this is now my longest review ever :P

STAPH *likes your review*

Hi Therese! Reading this, I don't think I can be much helping adding to things people haven't already covered. Just be a bit wary of having Rona and Reran as ...

Thank you for helping me with those nitpicks! I really needed them ^.^ Thank you for the lovely comment!

As for the ringmasters, I have decided to suspend my doubt until I hit the scene you mentioned involving them and Liza :)

Hm, I'm not sure about making Christian bisexual. It's just because I saw him as such a shy and formal person (I mean, him using Forgive Me when talking to ...

Thanks for keeping up with these reviews even though you're so busy these days! It really is appreciated. And it does look like you're the only one who remembers her ...

Hi Serene! Well, this is really awkward, because this time I have nothing to say. This is one of my favourite chapters. We get to see more about Nathan and ...

Silver, take all the time that you want

I like bringing up old reviews. Like this one xD

Thanks for the review Iggy! I didn't even think of her reaction to getting food too much, I will definitely fix it!

Liza went with him? Now this must be a new addition, methinks *scratches head* And ooh, I love the mentions about his father and mother in here too. Definitely new. ...