Deanie

Oh, no you don't need to do that. I just had to tell someone it was finished :3

ALL REVISIONS FINISHED. I did not get it all done in the summer though >.

Oh wow this reminds me of how much I hate commas xD

Mrs. Blue is a character based off BlueAfrica I mean, what a coincidence! Thanks for all the feedback

Hehe :D Good point! I will definitely add that in there ;)

Hm, maybe this should be something Christian asks Goblin so that all readers can know it? Emotions are perfect

Hi Blue! It looks like we're going to get Goblin's story now, yay! He could not remember what color her eyes had been before, but he was sure they had ...

Hi there! Well, this chapter was absolutely amazing. No seriously, I have nothing to say that someone before me, like Therese, hasn't said already. I will just keep reading. If ...

Yes, other than that it was very good!

Blue! BLUE I LOVE IT I don't know why, but this chapter needed that emotional battle in there as well. And then, when Christian was recovering I was like, yes, ...

Its okay! I can still understand it ^^ You've cleared up a lot of my points with reasoning already :D It's no problem with the sentences and all that, I ...

Not in my books it isn't. Too short xD

Hi Blue! I like this new addition to their underground battle :D What about Tirion's bad memories? How did he manage to escape them and kill the nightmares? Deanie x

Shady you make me smile c: I am going to edit with your suggestions! Thank you

Guilty as charged. Mic Word and I was too lazy to edit it before posting as well, which I will go do now. Ooh I missed a sound effect >.> ...