Deanie

Thanks so much for the review! This is actually very helpful :c

Ah, I didn't notice that inconsistency! I will definitely change it :)

Yes, how dare you!

This chapter was simply flawless. I honestly have no feedback excluding this nitpick: The only difference was the Falyn had lost someone fake 'The' should be that instead. Otherwise, perfect ...

Hey there! Just a quickie comment because I wanted to appreciate how much I liked this. I loved the idea of it, and how we got to see what the ...

Thanks for the review! I will correct those typos when I edit over everything :)

I love your reviews

Thanks so much for the awesome review Pretzel! I will continue working on it.

Oh, my apologies for that mistake! Disregard what I just said, then >>

Beautifully written

It's my pleasure to review! I do think that even though Mayne wouldn't be a main character, it would be good to invest in him somewhat. It's difficult for readers ...

I did misunderstand. I got that the flashbacks were a different time period, but I got the impression that they were kicked out of the state because the people lied ...

You are a fast reviewer DD: Which is why I love you < I think it might be because I was having difficulty writing this chapter. I will switch everything ...

Thanks so much for reading it all! I am glad you like it :)

You listen to JG while you do everything I mean, thank you for the review! I am coming to realize this whole thing makes more sense if you read the ...