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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Let's Talk Chapter 3

    Hey there Greenleaf! So I read the chapters previous to this one just so I would know what I was writing about. I wanted to be able to understand the ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Vampiric: Book Two, Chapter Four (Part One)

    *skips over reviewing previous chapter for same reason* Me again! Well this was interesting as well. We finally got to meet Ivan and be at the party, see what it ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Part Two

    Heya Therese :) It's always nice to read more of your story. I have to say I did like the progression of it. Now we're getting to see the religious ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Vampiric: Book Two, Chapter Two

    Heya Lucrezia Yesss! I am back to review book two of Vampiric *grins happily* I didn't review the first one because honestly, you had some awesome reviews there and I ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Hellfire's Pryde: Chapter One

    Hey there Knightteen! This may be a really really short review because there is barely a thing I would change here. You've managed to put great emotion in to this, ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: LAPIS :Chapter 13:

    Hey Serene! I can't tell you how much I missed reading this... I'm so glad you're continuing! :D I think you did as great as always in this chapter, luring ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 4- Am I in Superhero Heaven?

    Me again, as always :3 So I have far fewer things to nitpick here which means I can put more focus on commenting on the story when it comes to ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3- I Think Everything's Gonna Work Out Just.......Crap

    Hey there Ginga! I'm finally all caught up on the chapters. I have to say though, some of your description here was perfectly on point. After hearing about Emily snuggling ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fanfiction Re: "Sir, are you Batman?" Chapter 2- Plan A?

    Hey there Ginga! I didn't notice that you had more chapters up! D: I guess I need to catch up with my reviewing then... I love the nickname Batsy for ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Days of Future Pryde: Chapter Five

    Hello Knightteen! Wow :) This was such a lovely ending to this book in the series. I loved how you had the dream at the end which was sort of ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Days of Future Pryde: Chapter Three

    Hello there Knightteen! Eeee already the third book to series is coming out and I have a lot to read. So I'm trying to catch up now. Wow. I was ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 4)

    Hey there, here as promised. This was a really sad chapter to read. What happened to Elena and Mehta that day is really sad and you did a good job ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Days of Future Pryde: Chapter One

    Heya Knightteen! I'm here to finally catch up with this story. I am sorry that it took me this long already >> I have to say though, you have an ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Diakrino- The darkness within (Chapter 3)

    Hey there Gaurav! This was an interesting chapter! We got to see a bit more about him through his possessions, and the poem clearly showed us that he was upset ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 6

    Hey Noelle! I just wanted to explain that I didn't review the previous chapter because it had a lot of great reviews and I couldn't think of anything I'd add ...

    Apr 30, 2014


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