Deanie

I loved this poem. I made me think of parents fighting because of the child. I think the poem has a real great flow to it, and you put in ...

I love the idea of this poem! The title is very interesting and I just love how you are telling about all the different types of stories. I think this ...

Hi Maddy, its nice to meet you. For a start I love the title. And the beginning line was good too. I love the story behind this poem, how you ...

I like this poem. It was like a short story/ poem type of thing. Some lines were a little too long I think, which can be shortened. Also in the ...

I like this song. I don't usually review lyrics, and even though I have a voice like a cat being run over by a truck I tried to sing it ...

Wowee... such a beautiful story with a tragic ending. Its really long but if felt like a short story/ poem thing, but I liked it. I've never read one of ...

Hi muffins! I am glad you wrote this. I think, if Nate ever sees it he'll be really pleased to know that someone out there is missing him. I think ...

Wow, a great message to bring across. You should definitely write poems more often! I think you had a very strong beginning and end and the message was strong and ...

Wow! This poem has a really powerful message. I think we would all want to be remembered once we're gone. But as the first commenter said all the little nice ...

I like this short story. There is only on problem.. sometimes you said what was surrounding him as though the main character could see them. I don't think thats right. ...

Hi AM! This a a really short comment. I usually don't like these because they are really useless, but I just wanted you to know I love the characters you've ...

Really sad story. My eyes are fixated on the sandwiches but by the time she remembers to put her jumper on, I’d turned to smile at her -- I think ...

I think your poem is okay. I agree with the other commenter's, the poem dosen't exactly bring along what you are trying to say clearly. I think my favourite bit ...

Like the story! It was really nice, a little short but nice. I like how she has the baby but gets woken by the nurse in the room later. The ...

Nice second chapter. I liked having the viewpoint of the president. I liked how you get across the feelings on the ex-president when he finds out he is being fired. ...