Deanie

Well, hello there Shady, So, my 500th review goes to you, eh? I hope you feel special! ^^ I guess I should make it as good as I can, although ...

Heya! So, this was a nice chapter. I guess it does continue the Red theme then, and it was clever. I like how it's still connected to the case though. ...

Hey Willow, I feel a bit sad that I wasn't told that more parts were posted :( How was I to know? But I'm here now, and I have quite ...

Hi NightlyOwl, This was a shorter chapter in comparison to the others, but still long enough. I have five main things I found that could help improve this, and I ...

Hello NightlOwl, Well, I also have a train crash scene in my story. I guess it should help me in reviewing this one, eh? So let's start. This story is ...

Hi NightlyOwl, Here to read the rest! Thanks for letting me know it was all up. I do like following things through on YWS. I have a tip for you ...

Hey Wild :) So I have come to read this, and let me say, I loved reading it. I love discussions and questions like this. I cannot help but ask, ...

Hey Spotswood, So yes, I am extremely late in getting back to this. But I'm here and I see you've gotten four really great reviews on this, and from what ...

Hello :) So, I would like to start by saying that I chose to read this poem because of it's lovely title. Very intriguing :) And I must say it ...

Hey Cailey, For a first time at writing Stream of Consciousness, this was very good. It had good description in it, an and intriguing story. It was chilling, slightly haunting. ...

Hello :) I liked this short story. It had a good message in it, something everyone should know. And I found it interesting that of all the things their reflection ...

Hi Creativity, You have a great style with writing, and you write meaningful things. I like the imagery and description in this work. Most of the problems I've come across ...

Hi LMJ, Another chilling story. You write a lot of dark ideas down. I liked it, but I must say this one was more confusing. I didn't really understand that ...

Hey LMJ! Hehe, so I may be stalking all your works. But that does mean you get feedback, right? I'm sure you don't mind ;) So, wow. This story definitely ...

Hey LMJ, Well, this was something different and interesting. I don't think I've read a piece where the person is unknowingly dead and is being helped along into the... afterlife? ...