Deadman

Okay, feel free to take your time, I'm doing my own reviewing of it right now.

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There you go! Chew me to pieces!

That's weird....

Did you PM me about this chapter because it said I got one from you, but I couldn't read it....

There wasn't as many as there has been in the past, you've gotten much better.

Expect a review from me soon, I do not have the time to type it out right now. You'll have it at the latest tomorrow.

Thank you.

Thank you for the advice!

I'll be honest, I didn't know where I was going with it either. I got into one of those fits of writing, and they always turn out bad. However I ...

Anytime, I'm enjoying the story so my time is yours.

I've completely restructured the story and posted it under a new name. It is now titled The Zarareth's Legacy Chapter 1. I think you'd like the new one better.

Those are some very helpful tips, thank you.

Thank you. Also in the next chapter the armor and weapons should be described. The armor is not normal. I'll take your advice into consideration on the next chapter.