DeadPoets

This piece is completely and totally about things that bother me about America. We are called The Land Of The Free but in truth are restricted by our boarderline dictorial ...

You spelled Rhymes incorrectly.

I think you have an interesting plot. I like your character descriptions so far. I like the concept of memoirs a lot. I greatly encourage you to keep writing on ...

I like this a lot. I like the relatability and the strong emotional connection.