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Re: Writing Practise #1
Eeeep, thanks for pointing out that bitten/beaten typo. The solts thing was because originally this was part of a longer work and that was in universe slang. However, I ended ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Dead Sea Son
Would changing the first line to 'My only mistake was in turning back' work?
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Dead Sea Son
It is actually referencing Lot's wife and Orpheus and Eurydice. The voice that I take in poetry is meant to be a man who identifies heavily with femininity, so he ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Broken Love
Yeah, people generally write poems based on their feelings. Which makes objective critique p.hard sometimes. Sorry if I seemed kinda bitchy
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: I know People who believe in Ghosts but Not in Themselves
Thank you so much :> If it's not too nosy of me, would you mind me asking what you thought the meaning to be? I'm really interested in different people's ...
Oct 12, 2014 -
Re: I know People who believe in Ghosts but Not in Themselves
thank you so much! Uh, do you mind me asking where the concept got a bit lost? I want to tighten that up in future. You're right on the formatting ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones, But Pimples Hurt Worse
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Sep 30, 2014 -
Re: Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones, But Pimples Hurt Worse
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Sep 30, 2014