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Re: Blank - Chapter 6
Great chapter! I love it. I have to admit that i havnt read the first chapters you put up, i dont believe i was here yet, but i will go ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 5
Nice chapter. i liked the overall flow of it, but if its a sin to look at her without a barret, wouldnt Brother Povek be in a little more trouble ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Gate of Glendon- Prologue
I think it is way to short, personally. Alot of people added some good things, but some things i think there should be fixed/added into the story are: How do ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: West of Forgetfulness River
I liked the story, good job. Only a few things didn't catch my fancy in this story, the first was: you switched in between character perspectives by paragraphs. You wrote ...
Apr 8, 2008