DavidFeelsterWallace

I see a paradox here. If the theme of this work is about nihilist reflections on the self (in both the literal and metaphorical sense [that being the crux of ...

While this song is well constructed, I feel as if the concept of it can be improved. It's not a matter of this being bad work, but more along the ...

I love the tone of this poem. Most of the hilarity is achieved from relation to the character. The tender topic of sex when first learned about is something inherently ...

While simplicity isn't necessarily a bad thing, I feel as though this poem is rather plain in construction. This is not to say that things cannot be amended. You've appeared ...

What I enjoyed most about this work was the realism applied to it. It is a snapshot inside the life of a man on the verge of change. The strengths ...

Props to you for thinking metaphorically about what message you want to share with the world, Castiel. The fact you are experimenting with themes to be addressed non-directly is something ...

Quentin, I very much enjoyed this work of poetry. I interpreted the piece as a look inside the mind of an individual who had truly embraced solipsism. Along with this, ...