DarkerSarah

Find Part Two: Lust, here .

My dad LOVED this book. You really are a 40 year old man! Hehe... He wants me to read it, you think I should, eh?

Haha. Are you going to write more of this? I can imagine it being kind of wary to write a story you're used to telling orally. It's hard to get ...

Less Than Zero by Bret Easton Ellis w00t yeah! I read that one!

You're totally right, Rei. I think I did a better job on that with the other two parts. But like I told Sam, I'm not continuing with this, so, unless ...

What are you so happy about? Hehe...read "Remember Lanie" over in Romantic Fiction. It's a short story at the moment, but I really want to make it longer. Like...a novel...All ...

It SOUNDS nice, but it's really lacking in depth. REALLY. The poem's too short to have a repetition of "I lied."

*palmface* Of all my pieces on the entire site, Sam, you had to read this one! I'm completely finished with this and am probably never going to write any more! ...

I took a road trip across the panhandle of Texas once, and so I totally get this.

I like the word "meloncholy" to describe this poem. I think this is my favorite of yours that I've read. It's real, and has a sort of pretty honesty to ...

Actually, Snoink, I don't like that prom thing at all. I'm going to take it out, so it's nice to hear that someone else doesn't like it either. I'm glad ...

I feel that the last stanza was not connected to the poem. But, overall, I really enjoyed reading this. The second stanza was my favorite. -Sarah

Thanks guys! After like, being up here two weeks or something, I didn't think I was going to get any replies, but when I came back, there were three! Sarah, ...

I think the lines in bold should be in italics instead. I think it's more poetically, or grammatically correct. *points to title* I'm obsessed with grammar and syntax.

Sorry about the Roswell thing. It's just...a town where weird things always happen, and the opening lines just made me think of it. Of course, their problem is aliens, not ...